Wednesday, 28 January 2015

First filming session

For our first filming session we went to our main location at Newington Green park, whilst at our location we got caught in loads of rain however, we had an umbrella to keep the camera and equipment dry. When we was filming we managed to get most of the important long scenes done apart from one which due to the rain we couldn't film as it was too muddy for Talia to be laying on the ground 

First filming session



Theres are some pictures from out first filming session. 

Planning-Blogging Healthcheck 2

Feedback
From my feedback, my teacher has said that I have done a good level of blogging but there are some improvements that I can do to make my blog excellent. Here are the things I can do:

  • Be more creative with the blog design and ICT use.
  • Use of GIFs so we can create moving images.
  • Use slideshows instead of putting moving images.

Planning - Blogging health Check 2

Quoted below are the comments from my teacher of what I should do to improve and also how I can get a better grade.
"33 posts
You are blogging more now which is good. Aim for 2 or 3 posts over the course of each week. Keep blogging consistently rather than falling behind and then catching up.
- The presentation of your blog needs working on.
- Be more creative with the blog design and ICT use
- GIFs will bring your still images to life without having to create videos
- Group posts should reflect the work of 4 people, some posts lack sufficient detail
- Slideshows should be used for lots of photos"

Blogging health check 2

Comments from my first blogging health check:

"33 posts
You are making steady progress but lots of room for improvement. Many of your posts, especially the individual ones, are simply typed up blog posts which is ok for one or two but you MUST make good use of ICT and embed multimedia into your work. Make your blog as creative as it can be.
- The presentation of your blog needs working on.
- Be more creative with the blog design and ICT use
- GIFs will bring your still images to life without having to create videos
- Group posts should reflect the work of 4 people, some posts lack sufficient detail
- Slideshows should be used for lots of photos"

These comments were made by Marisa. I will work with these comments to get a higher level/grade.


Tuesday, 27 January 2015

Blogging health check feedback

These are my blogging health check feedback:
13/20
32 posts
You are making steady progress however there will need to be some improvement to see a real difference and an increase in your mark.
- The presentation of your blog needs working on.
- Be more creative with the blog design and ICT use
- GIFs will bring your still images to life without having to create videos
- Group posts should reflect the work of 4 people, some posts lack sufficient detail
- Slideshows should be used for lots of photos

I will try and use this feedback to make my blog more interesting and follow them to make my grade higher.

Monday, 26 January 2015