Feedback
pace
match cut on point
fading
long gaps
out of focus on the book
add music to speed up
add voice over
get rid of long tracking and change for short cuts
Pace:
She told us that the pace of our title sequence was too slow and made it seem like it was dragging on. However, we will increase the pace of this by adding the titles in and adding the voice over, making it more interesting and easier for the audience to understand what is happening.
Match cut on point:
Marisa also told us that or match cuts that we included in our title sequence are on point and they match completely making it continuous and not jumpy.
Long gaps:
Marisa said that the gaps that we have in the rough cuts are too long. However when we add in the titles the gaps will be shorted they are just there for us to remember where we are going to add the titles in. We will add our titles on to a black screen but we will also add a few of the title on to the moving image.
Out of focus on the book:
The clip where we have the main character writing in the book is out of focus. To resolve this we plan on re-filming this part of the title sequence to improve the quality.
Get rid of the long tracking and change them for short cuts.
Marisa told us that we shouldn't use the long tracking shot as it is not steady and it is too long, we will change this by using the short clips that we filmed of the classroom scene making it better quality.
To improve our title sequence we will take up the feedback that Marisa gave us. We will also add in some titles and fix the fades in to the title sequence to make it better.
Pace:
She told us that the pace of our title sequence was too slow and made it seem like it was dragging on. However, we will increase the pace of this by adding the titles in and adding the voice over, making it more interesting and easier for the audience to understand what is happening.
Match cut on point:
Marisa also told us that or match cuts that we included in our title sequence are on point and they match completely making it continuous and not jumpy.
Long gaps:
Marisa said that the gaps that we have in the rough cuts are too long. However when we add in the titles the gaps will be shorted they are just there for us to remember where we are going to add the titles in. We will add our titles on to a black screen but we will also add a few of the title on to the moving image.
Out of focus on the book:
The clip where we have the main character writing in the book is out of focus. To resolve this we plan on re-filming this part of the title sequence to improve the quality.
Get rid of the long tracking and change them for short cuts.
Marisa told us that we shouldn't use the long tracking shot as it is not steady and it is too long, we will change this by using the short clips that we filmed of the classroom scene making it better quality.
To improve our title sequence we will take up the feedback that Marisa gave us. We will also add in some titles and fix the fades in to the title sequence to make it better.
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